Very dramatic ending! I love the space/time puns. I guess he misinterpreted her signals.
Nice! I especially like the line about ’it’s been a long time since I didn’t understand “space” and “time”.
Well done, and deserving of the win for the Lights Out challenge!
I won? What an awesome surprise. Thanks! Maybe this will prompt me to get off my ass and write some more.
Ouch. Great moment. I really love the idea of the astrophysicist taking exception to the lame excuses of “space” and “time” in terms of relationship.
Used your story in a challenge. Haha! http://ficly.com/stories/9178
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