Cute ending, and it’s nicely set up. Feels a bit thrown together though. That first paragraph is really rough with a run on followed by a sentence started with a conjunction. It could use some serious cleaning up. Oh, and what’s a wiiden wall? Is that a typo, or do I need to google it? Really lovely idea with a kind of teasing, taunting feel to it which is fun, just done perhaps a bit too quickly.
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