Bizarre and dangerous. I like it. Felt at first like another ficly epic adventure, but by the end felt like its own unique story that could go on without any further metaphor or reference to our little community. Nice job!

was happy to see a sequel! I like that this can lead to something much greater. :)

I like the Ficly epic adventures :)

thanks for the nice comments guys… i hope to start writing a little more .. :)