Meant as a sequel to http://ficly.com/stories/25427

Hey… why not just sequel it directly. since the original story is already within the house, readers can follow the sequel.

More often than not, angels are a pain in the butt.

ooo, nicely described.
supposedly you can add to the address and make it both and entry and a sequel..

Tried. Dint work Dx

I struggled to follow this one. I think it was mostly in the first paragraph where you start with a missing comma, too many adjectives in a row in the second one, cumbersome phrasing (…of the Earth brought), then okay the last sentence seems okay. Not trying to be harsh—just seems like it could do with some revision. It was just a tough read for me at the start, which threw me for the rest of the ficly.

Thanks THX. I prefer when people are honest.