Comments are definitely welcome! Thanks.

Very nicely done – perfectly understandable despite the mispellings and wrong words. I particularly like “Gold for Cars” – not that much more absurd than those “Cash for Gold” scams.

Reminds me of those annoying pop-ups…
@Sanglorian- I thought the errors added to the authenticity of the story, since most scams that I’ve ever gotten had multiple mistakes in them too.

This was funny! :)

Yes, the spelling mistakes are intentional. The only exception is the period at the very beginning. If I didn’t put it there the whole first chunk of asterisks (I don’t think that is spelled correctly) disappeared when I published the story.

You nailed the format and the spelling errors. Maybe it’s a little too close to a spam email!