Chuckle.

Nice little ending. Any particular reason for the structural design?

hahaha, nice! I hope mom is cool..

tjwell01- No particular reason. It just kind of happened that way. :D

Great read! Loved that she couldn’t sit next to him in the movie theater… increased the tension! Well done— I didn’t want it to end!

I hope that young man behaves himself! :B

Okay, I should try to leave a more helpful comment. I think you could improve the dialog between the narrator and the boy at the end. When she says, “It reminds me of this one book,” how does the boy know what book she means?

Including details helps the story feel more solid. Giving both the movie and the book titles would help us feel like this is really taking place.

cthulhuburger- I purposely left the titles out and the sentences unfinished to make it more open, so it would apply to more people. However, I get what you mean about specifics. :) Thanks for the advice!