I think it’s a shame that you went from ‘dogs’ to ‘wolves’ – I think it would have been much more interesting to do it the other way. Warriors get compared to wolves all the time, but if you’d went with dogs you could have compared one to a terrier and the other to a bulldog, or otherwise emphasised their differences.

Sanlorian has a good point. Plus, wolves are seen as noble fighters, dogs, more down and dirty fighting. Loved the story regardless. ‘Why do you have so many swords? You only have the two hands.’ – hilarious []o)

Yeah, I definately prefer ‘dogs’ as a description, plus it shows something more base about it.

I also love the line Sir Bic picked out. It’s a very nice line :)