When you folks continue this story, please consider describing the characters a bit. As someone who hasn’t read all the comments on the challenge page, I have only the faintest idea of who the characters are or what they’re doing.

I’m enjoying reading about these unknowns, though :P

This is fun stuff. I get the feeling that not only is a battle between characters going on, but in someways it appears that you two authors are having a go at each other, through the development of the warriors you pen.

If this was ever expanded (which I think would be awesome if at the end we managed to collaborate everything into a novel we could send to publishers) description would be easier. Perhaps for the benefit of people reading who haven’t read the challenge you could each make a quick descriptive ficly as a sequel…? Just a suggestion.

I love this sequel. Perfect fightin’ talk, and both of you are good at describing the action. It’s an awesome read.