Bumpersticker from the website reads:
“Your body would look good in my trunk.”

Scary, gave me chills. You captured the feeling of menace from the stranger.

I really liked this, Robert. Her vulnerability was believable and his cavalier attitude very well-written.

However, I might have left out the bit about concern in favor of the misplaced happiness and trust. Just my style though…NICE PIECE!

Oh wow, that is chilling. Bumper stickers like that really give me the creeps. I know they’re supposed to be funny, but who wants to put that on their car?

I agree with Browncoatben, both about it being a very good story and it not needing the concern at the end.

Ok due to popular advice, I have altered it slightly. You guys are right, it feels more “punchy”.

I love it! Excellent story, ending took me by surprise.

love it

I love the creepy ambiguity in the ending!