This was really nice. I liked that second to last paragraph. Very refreshing, it’s been a while since I read something sweet, simple and positive.

I love the last sentences!! Choices. Listen to the rain, to God. Freedom is not in death. It’s in life. This is a great way to end it. Not with suicide, but with life, with something better than what one had. Freakin’ bananas!!

Though storm one and two are linked they also have the ability to stand alone. The descriptions are wonderfully written throughout.

The ending is beautiful in my opinion. Sometimes at your lowest points it is very realistic to see freedom in death, but your last lines are very liberating. Favorite: Listen to the rain, to God. Love, love, love.

The ending is beautiful in my opinion. Sometimes at your lowest points it is very realistic to see freedom in death, but your last lines are very liberating. Favorite: Listen to the rain, to God. Love, love, love.

While the ending was a very drastic turn, so much so that I almost had trouble believing it, it was definitely what the story needed. A nice way to wrap up the one before it. Nice flowing prose.