For those of you wondering how a crossbow can be holstered, the arms of the crossbow’s bow are collapsable, and swing out when removed from th holster.
Wonderful descriptions H.S.! This story can stand on its own merit. Really nice visuals. This Red Knight guy really rocks! Sanglorian should be happy with the character development on this one. []0)
I think you need to amend one of his twin swords on his back to one of the twin swords on his back, because the repetition of ‘his’ is jarring.
I like this installment. Whilst the action is slow, it’s another thing I enjoy, like a slow-motion shot in a film. Loving the descriptions. Does Quick merit this character description?
H.S. Wift
Sir Bic
Sanglorian
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))