Very nice. The title pulled me in and I’m glad it did. I enjoyed this. ‘We wait for the moments but blink and they’re gone.’ – I really liked that line.
Very nice.
The title pulled me in and I’m glad it did. I enjoyed this. ‘We wait for the moments but blink and they’re gone.’ – I really liked that line.
Thank you Sir Bic, I also changed the line of “looking into the memories of time” as it felt very corny and uninspired.
Sir Bic 
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