nicely done! I’m not really sure how he has to follow her.. that line just feels awkward.

I feel that the last two lines don’t really fit with the rest of the story. I also wasn’t sure how Jenessa’s injuries were related to politics. Perhaps I’m missing something.

I was unsure how Jenessa’s condition had anything to do with politics either. Plus the last thing Karla says is kind of perplexing. Why forgive and where is she going? Perhaps that needs explaining in another ficly.
The pain is real though. I can really feel it. There always needs to be someone to blame.

I don’t mind the ambiguous “politics” mention; that kind of thing is the intriguing stuff that makes up ficlets. But I do agree with the others about the ending…it feels a little out of character from what we see of her. I feel some other setup would feel more right, though I’m kind of stupid and can’t say exactly what it would be.