It’s always nice when someone comes along and gives meaning to something. Before I read this ficlet my drunken man was just a drunken man rambling about the world. Now you’ve given him, haha, purpose. I love that.

Very well written. :)

Interesting turn of events here. I liked how you added a bunch of depth to the character, such as that he was kinda of religious before the whole argument happened.

thanks Ben! thanks orange! I actually had two ideas for this, so I may write another sequel..

wow, i really like this elsha. I have experienced something like this in my life where my uncle had some ‘calling’ so i can relate.

if you love someone you’ll live in a cardboard box with them….or regret it

yeah MJY, I don’t think she loved him and he must not have loved her, but is feelign sorry about himself and he won’t get another girl liek that now will he! someone better fix him up!