Smooth

Overall, I agree with Writtence – it’s smooth. However, there a few lines which don’t slow.
“I am serene I am deranged” is one of them.

The last line is also clumsy, which is a shame because it should cap off your piece. I know it breaks with the “I am” theme, but what about “And I don’t plan to change”?

i wrote this at 3 am for my youtube bio so shrug, but i dont plan to change…this is who i am and who im going to be and i am clumsy and awkward in real life so everything i do just follows suit.