Why did you write a love poem?

I really like the last paragraph (stanza?).

I know it’s nit-picking, but: “When sleep doesn’t come easy.” should be “easily.”

“Gives me a feeling that nothing else can compare.” should be “compare to.”

writtence, the question is why wouldnt i?

and sanglorian thank you for commenting on both of my poems, and as for the grammar its a poem so. if i changed it to compare to it would be more straightforward and less like a poem. for example, read shakespeare, he doesnt exactly speak like a dictionary. just saying =). thanks for the advice though

I love it sis. I missed your writing, but it is beautiful as always. And in reference to the 2nd and 3rd stanza, remember your grad party?? How you were so unsure and then he left? =)

fans of love poems so sweet and airy stand up! :)

Lovely and sweet ode to love found it what sounds like an unlikely way. Could definitely relate to the difficulty falling asleep resulting in a little mind wander.