It’s been years since I was taught French. These days, I generally only use it as a spoken language, and I don’t always manage that very well.

This has taken quite some time and extensive use of a dictionary, but I’m quite pleased with how I think it reads.

However, I apologise, wholeheartedly, to all francophones for any mangling of your beautiful language.

Wow, great story.
I see a couple or errors, but your french is not bad at all and the vocabulary is great.

I really liked your story.

I really don’t think my 4 in French is deserved, seeing as I understood almost all of this. Very nicely done!

All hail Google’s translator. I am liking this story. Moody, as is your signature, and quite mysterious. At least they paid her…

This is great. Clicked on it because of the name, stayed for the story.

Even aside from the language thing, I thought it was a neat story idea, very unsettling to think about having happen to yourself, ya know.

Whoa, creepy… J’aime bien cette dernière phrase.

Excellent story idea! Why contain the wondrous art of writing on ficly to any one arena of language? It gets our thinking caps on (as good writing should) and is terrifically awesome :P muy bien. lol sorry that’s the best I can seem to do with language