I feel like this and its sequel are not giving us enough information to interest us. The most interesting and compelling mysteries aren’t those about which we know nothing, but those where we know heaps and still can’t figure them out.

Very true, I’ll try to take that into consideration. thanks for the input! And not to rationalize any of my errors or anything but this is the first time i’ve written anything that wasn’t an essay for a professor so I’m sorry if I’m a little slow on learning.