gasp! what happened?

Love the cliffhanger, sort of an ongoing theme for the series. It’s fun and sort of dares the next author to go for it. Also loved the switch to and introduction of a new character into the mix. Also, cool nickname for thoughtful, animal loving Harvey. So, lots to like in this one!

Nice, I love how we’re telling three different interweaving stories at once here. Maybe more, in a few more chapters. You’ve got sequel!

Intense and quick paced, not sure who’s good or bad yet.