I like how “Echo” has to say things twice to her mother, and also the little twist at the end.

Interesting how she continues to help her mother, listening to her complain about her father, just to be heard. I hope the mother learned something!

This was a great lesson. I sometimes keep putting off listening to my kids because I have something more “important” to do. Nice beginning, you should continue this.

This is an intriguing start. I really liked the twist at the end and the flow of the dialogue.

Thanks for all the comments guys ^^

I can’t add to what the commenters have said, so I’ll echo them: great dialogue, clever twist.