Aww, you missed your nemesis, I mean, he, HE missed his nemesis.
I want to say the first paragraph is great! Too happy? well, I did get lost between the clothes description and ‘their’ impressions, because jeans are plural and I was wondering why they were on the floorboards (which made the scene momentarily racy!)
Wait, still to positive for you? Well the “eyebrows framing silver aviators shatter rays abroad under noontime sun” needs some kind of separation.
Also, I think the ficly house challenge has taken the canon award away from this idea.
That said.. what could Rodney be doing??
Clearly, one of your antagonists needs to pen the antagonistic part of Rodney.

too* ( I edit, and I admit it.)

Haha, way to call me out for my negative side ;) I hope venting with my Thoughts on Ficly will make me healthier on this site… Woke up in Maui and felt like emptying my cache. Feel much better about the vibe here :) Thanks, Elsha!

yes, I read it, and I think venting was a good thing. I have conceded to be more tolerant, but no promises that I will read your Batman series, which does have copyright issues, but cough cough maybe you can misspell their names cough cough Oh my, something choked me up, there!

Don’t get me wrong, I love my gay friends dearly, I’m just not a Batman fan.. :P

No copyright issues, parodies are protected.