Nice to see this going somewhere, maybe it’s just me but she seemed to be just hanging around for far too long. I like the sneaking around thing, but a spy story also needs gunfights and explosions. Give us some action! []o)
She seems a bit too loud and not so sneaky with the knock knock line, but maybe the building’s inhabitants are all dead or deaf from the blast, so it doesn’t matter. :) Not only that, but your clearance argument with her partner also makes her seem green.
Sir Bic
ElshaHawk (LoA)