There’s always been something mysterious about riding the subway, so I totally get the child-like fascination with it. It hasn’t left me either. Let’s hope that Stephen finds something beyond Far Rockaway on his ride.

I know what you mean! I started this story because I was wondering what happens at the end of the subway myself.

love the character descriptions!

I think you are missing a to in the first sentence here _ what happens to a subway train_. Another here and it the first time, either take out the it or add a was.

I second Elsha about the characters.