Well, I was going to suggest creating a new, double-returned paragraph at the quotes and avoiding text speak, but I realized you probably had no room. You may can sacrifice some description and unnecessary words[hard, I know] to make room for the paragraphs and spelled out words, but I’m pretty sure you wouldn’t want to. It’d make it much more clear, though. Other than that, it’s still.. sort of confusing.

Amazing. I’ve always felt that White Blacula has it over Black Blacula in spades.