This is really nice setup Elsha. Your characters already have an amazing sense of voice and personality, and your writing is impeccable, as always.

Great character voices. The tone is fantastic as well. Nice piece.

So I guess this is the featured story, with just two comments? Slow news day at Ficly. I have to say it’s a shame that this story only has two comments, and here’s hoping it’ll get more attention now that it’s featured!

I saw the first line on the homepage and I had to read the rest. Well done!