“The time I teleported my car it turned upon a street 50 miles away I don’t even know how the police were able to trace it” and “This power is a nightmare why do I have to have a power that I can’t control.” are run-ons. There should be a comma between away and I on the first sentence and the second one should be two separate sentences, separated before “why.”

Oh, other than that, it’s a fascinating subject.

Thanks I think I fixed that up alogn with a couple other things i noticed.

“Why do I have to have a power that I can’t control” should have a question mark after it, rather than a period… But that would stink to have as a power! You would have to constantly teleport everything to a little ways away… Great story! Will try to sequel