did he wake up and say that or was he still asleep?
my favorite part: real quiet like. :P

Hahaha…awesome.

Aw, kind of a sad little look into the inner life of a cranky cowpoke. The first sentence in the second paragraph could use some work, maybe be broken into two, and at least switch quite for quiet, which is what I think you meant. Nice job continuing the story.

Thanks for the comments, ya all! Also, I made changes like you suggested, Doc, and I think it reads better now. []o)