What a place to end it! I gather that you’re writing this a bit at a time, so I can’t help but wonder what happens next. The obvious possibilities are either that she cures him or that she doesn’t. I think what will be interesting to see is how the fact that he’s on drugs is going to change her usual MO.

You are correct on all counts, on all comments thus far as well. :) That means I am conveying what I want to convey with each one. I’m thinking I may expand this into a short story outside of ficly.