crazy dream.

Is this supposed to be a dream? I suppose it could be because there are elements of fantasy here. But I didn’t read it as such.
There is a lot of good imagery here.
My only critique is of the first line. Myriad is another word for countless, innumerable, etc.
So it should be “Myriad colours” instead of “a myriad of colours”.
Otherwise, nicely done. I want to know what happens next!

Definitely got surreal going. I think the first paragraph, while descriptive and full of images, feels a little wordy to me and could use some more brevity. I think the main thing is that the sentences are basically very similar in structure and length. Other than that, the concepts are nice and the imagery is good.