Cool man, cool. Should we snap our fingers while we read this? []o) Wow, there are so many great phrases in here, but the question, ‘How do you go about compartmentalizing a Kraken?’, takes the cake! Welcome aboard, sir Roarke. I look forward to reading you more.

Ironically, the last line feels a little cutesy to me (that may not be the right word…). Sir Bic was right when he said it’s a coffehouse sort of piece, which I actually think would be better-written as poetry. The repetition would be a little more powerful if so, I think. But that’s my opinion, and more a formatting thing than anything, so take it as you please.