This pushed all my buttons. Effective way to introduce characters, just enough information to warm them to life. I never knew the electronic game of Simon Says could be so interesting….(yes I know it was for one of the challenges… lol) smooth read.
This has an eerie feel stemming from the unknown destination and the fact that the others never return, mixed with the simple commands and the show made of it all. good job!
Roarke
JayDee
ElshaHawk (LoA)