you’ve crafted a distinct relationship here in a scant few words, very nice. Good balance of question/answer in the dialogue, seems very natural. Your writing has an immediate “feel” to it.
It reminds me of The Road, from the very little of it I’ve read, in that the relationships are nicely hinted at through some simple dialogue. For aesthetic reasons I would double-space paragraphs, though, if there’s room.
Roarke
Stovohobo