You go, girls!
Nice action, Robert. Maybe in second sentence she is “lunging” forward instead, or just kicking, ‘kicking forward’ sounds silly. Don’t ya think? Oh, this is so corny – I love it! Charlie’s Angels here we come! []o)

Well done mixing the action with the dialogue.

so much for the bathrobe images of her memory.. :) love the mix of action and dialogue! girls are so wordy!