Reminds me of an incident that happened on the senior class trip to New York City, although it was not the air conditioner that failed but something involving the sanitation facilities in the back of the bus. Even stranger was the fact that nobody had used them.

The characters all feel pretty believable and the situation is nicely described. I think it fails to really grab me, but that’s probably more me than anything you’ve done. The details are really nice, though.