Let me first say: the topic of this story fills me with disgust.
Okay, now, with that out of the way, let me say – your writing is genius! Referencing the title of the previous story by highlighting the War in the descriptions of this atrocity is intense. The writing is profound and much to be admired.

I am sincerely disgusted and horrified by the subject material myself, but I guess that’s part of being able to push boundaries.

Thank you so much for wonderful compliments. I was shocked and amazed at the grittiness of the original.

Oh dear Miles! This was brutally awesome. You conveyed a great amount of horror in such little space, and with (dare I say) lovely descriptions.

Only one that bothered me was: “into the air like a corpse”. I can’t quite picture an exhale being thrown into the air like a corpse.

Thanks, Megan!

It was… a pretty weighty exhale? You may have a point. I’ll have to think about that.