Welcome to Ficly.
The melting you’ve described is reminiscent of how an ice cream cone melts: One drop at a time, nothing to be overly concerned with, a slow process. Having a child as the harbinger seems fitting with the scene as well. Nicely done.

Thank you for the welcome! This place is a wonderful find and I feel lucky to be a part of things.

And also for the delightful comment! I’m glad that you enjoyed it.

I liked it…a logic resting in the heart of the story along with literature.Good work Miles!!

Thank you!

I would have dipped my finger in it, you left me wondering what the sky tastes like.