Hmm. I’m not sure if I paced this right, or captured the slow escalation that I wanted to.

I cursed the 1024 limit more than once in the writing of this ficly.

I like how it slowly dawned on me where you were taking this story. Pacing can be hard in 1024 characters, but I think you did a fine job here.

God’s going nyah nyah nyah I beat ya to the punch on that one!

The end was abrupt, but the build up was great fun!