“…who he would be if she didn’t."

Hmmm… intriguing.

Wow. Thank you so much for participating!

I have no idea where you intended this to go.. he had blood on his shoes, and his wife is pivotal in his attitude..

Actually, I didn’t say she was his wife, did I? Daughter? Sister? Even landlord (though that’s lame)?

And if you had a good idea where this was intended to go, then it’d be less of a story starter and more of a story, wouldn’t it? :D

Wow. This is a really intriguing opening with some very vivid details. I’m not at all sure where one would take it, though.

see?? garsecg is stumped too.. ah, you didn’t say who she was… but he has the key to this house, so it’s not breaking and entering.. maybe he came about the key in an odd manner?? *still thinking