Funny story, well written, one inconstancy: Why would he worry about getting the shit kicked out of him if he has this wrathful demon-thing inside of him. Unless…. Wait a sec, writing a sequel.

DEMON POSSESSED MOBSTERS FROM OUTER SPACE!

This should be a movie.

@Oy- He doesn’t know. He passes out before the other Entity presents itself. However I liked your take on it too.
@Jonathan- I hadn’t meant for him to be an actual alien, but go crazy! “In a world of violence, one man struggles to find his place in the Mob, unfortunately he’s not really a man at all, worse than that, he doesn’t know that he is possesed. This summer all Hell breaks loose in: DEMON-POSSESSED MOBSTERS FROM OUTER SPACE!”

I love how the style changes so dramatically at the end, and the

Haha, this is very cool. I love the idea of some reedy wannabe failure as a mobster being host to demonic rage. Nice interpretation of the title!

Garsec! Come back. While it is interesting, funny, and maybe a little ironic, I can’t see the end to your thought!

nice twist on the word Host, much better than a game show scene. :)

Excellent twist! I love the story. Just one typo: “of the of time”