Very insightful, and very well written.

I completely agree. I certainly know that I’m crazy. I do all sorts of weird stuff for no good reason.

I think this is a nice sentiment, well expressed. I think some of the language could be tidied up – with these confessional-style pieces you don’t want to overwork the piece.

I’m “crazy in love with this”. It contains many grammatical mistakes, but crazy writing is always breaking the rules; your words are disjointed and stammering, it means your telling the truth; Cold calculated well measured words are lies.

By the way, “CRAZY” is the new norm.

“However, love is a completely different story. It’s not just being able to stand a certain amount of insanity but choosing to accept it totally, which is sort of a bullshit move, but it’s an important, symbolic, bullshit move.”

Gods, I love that line. Oh, to find somebody who would accept my own level of insanity.

You leave me wondering so much what’s going to happen next. What an entertaining build-up!

Wow. Wow wow wow. Thanks for participating in another of my challenges!

revelatory logic. you took a step back, looked at the whole picture, analyzed it, and then asked us to see it too. The more I think about it, the better it sounds.

Nice analysis and good set up for a sequel. When is the party?

I like it. It’s a good pre-story, like this would be a good voiceover at the beginning of a quirky action-comedy or screwball comedy. Nice conversational tone you’ve affected as well.