The constant good flow and the strong imagery are things that stand out the most for me in your story.

Powerful, structured scenes, played out in a variety of ideas and concept.
Overall, it was not only enjoyable to read, but also easy to the eye.

Simply as good a capture of the feel and language of Lovecraft as one could imagine. Very well done…

nicely done! Trumps mine, for sure. :) A background, an event, and the looming danger all here, and all wonderfully worded. All in all in awe. :P say that 3 times fast…

How could I not read a story entitled ‘The Death of H.P. Lovecraft’? Well done, as well. I like the historical details and the way you mimic Lovecraft’s writing style.