Interesting. The rythmn made me think of song lyrics sometimes, and the repetition of the line “rising up from my fall” reinforced that vibe. Does it come from a real experience? Or is it more an expression of emotions rather than events?
Interesting. The rythmn made me think of song lyrics sometimes, and the repetition of the line “rising up from my fall” reinforced that vibe.
Does it come from a real experience? Or is it more an expression of emotions rather than events?
story of my life…
Well I have been writing song lyrics and this is one of my songs but i made it into more of poetry for ficly. I’ve been doing it with a few of my entries lately. and it is not actual experience just kind of thought it up.
That’s deep Violet, I hope it wasn’t from experience. Even so great poem!
JayDee 
writtenwithaquill 
Violet 
Jeveux Lécrivain