Minor problems with spelling and punctuation aside, this is riveting. I can’t possibly imagine what the main character is going through, having to listen to her own friend reveal himself as a perpetrator.
This hit me really hard. To have gone through that, and then to be expected to comfort this friend… that’s about as painful as it gets. I like the back and forth way you portray it; the pain is tangible, that of both of your characters. Intense.
Lulu
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