Commentary: I was about to raise a complaint about the time sequence of the last couple of installments. When Sofiya first met Katya, it was early spring and there was still snow on the ground. Now there’s gardening going on, but I couldn’t account for more than 2 or 3 days between the two events. Introducing a greenhouse seemed to be the only way that I could resolve the problem.
Haha…I swear I hadn’t noticed, I was struggling to find a way to advance Kat’s personal story…
You, sir, are brilliant. You not only introduced a brilliant fix for your dilemma, but you managed to tie it back into the larger story. I for one say, well done!