Nice keeping of the characters. Might want to mark it mature, though. PG-13 movies get to use the F word exactly once, apparently, and that’s only near the end when the bad guy gets really angry.

Done and done.

Personally I have an ethical problem with referring to someone as ‘unbelievable’ and ‘more than a man’ that then hits women. I already dislike your main character after two pages which isn’t necessarily a problem but it is when you are setting them up to be so incredible. I’m not saying that all characters that hit women are instantly dislikeable but without context this is an early trait that is extreamly hard to overlook.