Lovely. Seems like a poem, even if not formatted like one. Makes me want to go to sleep, in a good way.

a very good existential piece, but I feel that “Your ghost remains as my personal martyr” seems more direct and forward statement compared to the rest of the work, which has more of a mystical feel.

Krulltar, thanks for this comment. My mind was on various levels with this one! Appreciate the feedback.