LMFAO, this is awesome in a sick and twisted sort of way. Just what I figured someone might do with the premise. I like your beginning and end, very well done…but there are so many unexplored options too!

You captured the hopelessness of the MC very well. It is sad that we have these sorts of people in our society.

You are so right about the loss of free will being rape when it is taken from you, not given willingly. Good point.

Wow. This was a great story to come back to this site too. Very nicely written, I could feel her rawness and the tension in he words. Awesome story.