Great series. Your characters kind of remind me of the Endless from Neil Gaiman’s “The Sandman” series.
The only thing I would say is that some of the phrases seem unnessarily complicated:
“…theonesthatcausepeopleopposedtoustobedead."
I think you could simplify that to something like “bring death to our enemies”.
“Weourselvescanmovefasterthanthought,"
The ourselves seems unneeded. It could work as “We can move…” or even “We move…”
“…tearingthoseotherthanusto _pieces…”_
I actually can’t think of another word to substitute “those other than us” with. Opponents, perhaps? I’m not sure.
Sorry if I seem to be overly critical, I assure you it’s not my intention. Your characters are beautifully rich and I can’t wait to see the rest of the 13 :)
Thanks! I was trying to catch what they speak like, which is referring to things very obliquely. They would prefer to say something complicated when something simple would do.
JayDee
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