This is great, but doesn’t answer any questions or address any facts contained in the prequel. Who are the Buckles? And do their young children work at the factory? But, there is one way to bring it all together, change it back to italics, This could easily be a dream sequence and would work perfect as such, I love how this informs the readers that Winter is a vengeful woman and this appeals to some readers, that this character may or may not do anything to get revenge.
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