On the grammar question… because if you wrote “who’s this?” it would mean “who is this?” and not “to whom does this belong.” And because English is complicated and stupid.
I loved all the sensory details in this, I really felt like I was a part of it!
Awesome visuals, 32. I like the idea of someone just “falling” into the fanciful land of Ficly. The descriptions used here provide a quick moving panorama that holds the reader’s attention. Nicely done.